13 Haziran 2013 Perşembe

Second Term- Second Article Reflection

        This article'' Show Me the Way to Go Home'' is about to a topic which is very controversial. Living with family or leaving family? This have been always a point at issue. Although there is a common idea of living with friends after 18 age, there are unexpected numbers of young adults who are living with their parents. 

      In our country, from being born to getting married people live with their families. They only leave their family for education or military service. However, in many American and European countries this situation is different. Youth in these countries have the right to leave home at the age of 18 on condition that they provide all the necessities and they mostly use this right. In this article, we are going to deal withthe teenagers who move away from home when they are 18. 

       
Like Faith, Donnie and Ava, young people who have left home are without 
money, food, warm clothes, shelter or any idea of where to get help. 
They desperately need housing and money but they can become lost in a maze 
of rules and regulations. It’s little wonder that Faith, Donnie and Ava ended up 
squatting in an empty house in Albert Square. 
Some can even become homeless. Many – like Faith – become ‘sofa surfers’. 
Homeless teenagers can end up sleeping on the streets where they are exposed 
to drugs and alcohol and are at risk of being attacked or abused. 

    This article is about to the examples of people turning back to their family's homes. They realizes that living with family is more beneficiary because they can buy a car for themselves, they learn a lot things from each others etc..

    I think, all youngs should read this article and should think twice before leaving their families.

2 yorum:

  1. Dear Arzu,
    I would not have read this article. Thanks to you, I have an idea, now. Firstly, I should mention that your language is very fluent. There are a few grammar mistakes which I think you did mistakenly.

    First Paragraph:
    "is about to a topic" ("to" is unnecessary here)
    "This have been always ..." (this "has" been)
    Fourth Paragraph:
    "This article is about to the examples" ("to" is unnecessary)
    "They realizes" (They realize)

    I think you did these mistakes absently. However, these are little mistakes. Except that, I liked your point of view very much. I mostly agree with you but I think leaving family teaches you a lot, too. Sometimes teenagers may need to be away from their family to stand on their feet and you realize the value of your family. However, staying with family surely has more advantages. Thanks for all your effort ! :)

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  2. Elif thanks a lot for warning.:)

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