PIANO
The piano is a musical instrument that is designed to be played
by means of a keyboard. It is
one of the most popular instrument in
the world. It was invented by Bartolomeo Cristofori. I like its voice so much
that playing the piano is one of the my biggest
dreams. It is so affective. While listening, it makes me happy and relaxed. It
makes me dream and think about beautiful things. According to me, it is the
symbol of smartness in that playing the piano inquires precision and
sensitiveness. It is the symbol of beuty in that its shape and appearance are
eye-catching. And finally, it is the symbol of power in terms of its mighty
appearance.Also,
playing the piano is very difficult because both sides of the brain should work
at the same time. Your fingers should be long for playing well. So, it is both
most difficult and most enjoyable musical instrument , I think.
This video is one which I love so
much. It is too attratcive because this union of rain and piano is much harmonious. While listening I feel
that I relieve from my whole problems, troubles and griefs due to the fact that
rain cleans everywhere such as streets and cities. This union is so relaxing
that I cannot help thinking positively
and dreaming. I feel as if I saved from all the loads on me and I was the
happiest person in the world. And at the end of it a smile appears on my face.
Dear Arzu;
YanıtlaSilI liked your writing so much. It is very fluent. While I was reading it and listening the video which you share, I had enjoynment and felt relaxed.You put your ideas clearly in your writing. I could not see many mistakes in your wtiting. I think it is a well-organized one. (asena akgöl)
Dear Arzu AKKAYA,I really like your writing. I think you chose a very nice topic. Reading your pharagraph and listening the video made me happy indeed. I like your writing style. It did not bore me. In addition to all of these, there is no gramatical mistakes in your pharagraph. Thanks for all your efforts.
YanıtlaSilDEAR ARZU,
YanıtlaSilYour choice is good.I like piano,too.Your examples and sentences are clear.But I think,some sentences very long.you can write shorter and this can be more clear your ideas.
Thank you so much for this good informative and enjoyable writing :)