If somebody watches that video, I am sure that she/he wants to be a student at ODTU , because the video describe an ideal student that tries to create new knowledge, is interested in the problems of her/his home country and is not satisfied with the existing knowledge. And I think, the most affective part of the video is '' We can change the whole world.'' This part is the best of all due to the fact that it implies that there is no limit like university, city. It purposes the whole world. Hence, I like it so much in that it consists of really fascinating sentences of which meanings are quite intense.
I brain ODTU : I find this slogan very effective because evokes intelligence, sharpness and creativeness. I think that there is no need for changing this slogan on account of that it reflects the students studying at ODTU in terms of that they are privileged, special and prosperous.
I enjoyed reading your journal entry.You have introduced some points in your journal,which is very informative.You have shared your creative thoughts,but you need to pay attention several points such as subject-verb agreement,fragment,word choice.In general,you have done a fairly good job.I am looking forward to your next journals.
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